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| Julius Magnus 2007-09-02 ch 1,  | abuseA great story with a cynical ending which, I suspect, condemns some aspects of our material-based society. It is a story that grabs you at the throat and refuses to let go. The prose itself is powerful and efficient. I do think that the part dealing with the rising sun slows the story down some what, but still... Effective! You're a talented writer. I'd like to read more from you. |