Reviews for feathered and finned

PineTheFae 2007-09-02 ch 1,	abuseThis is a very dreamy poem, I loved how it flowed. It's sad, but beautiful way of telling a love story in a sense. This has become my favorite of yours. ^-^
Nemonus 2007-09-01 ch 1,	abuseNice! The metaphor carries throughout well and "Or is the life of wings on high/...one more beautiful and one more free/than that of a creature born beneath the sea?" brings up an interesting point I wouldn't've thought to get from it. The "child's" "dream" of love from another "medium" made impossible by such (metaphorical) things as oxygen and gravity is a poignant illustration.
Tranquil Thorns 2007-09-01 ch 1,	abuseI really like how you started out with your poem! I think it gives it a dreamy sort of fluency. (: Very pretty wording, too. I love the descriptions of birds and fish, and the questions you ask throughout the poem. Once again, a very dreamy quality to it. Very calming, lulling words. It makes me want to fly with the birds or swim with the fish. Or both.