Excellent use of italics and bold lettering! I love the ending. It gave me chills. I liked the beginning and ending stanzas best, but its a great piece all the way through. Amazing job. This is going on my favorites list. Thanks for the review!

I'm not exactly sure why, but I like this better than SuicidaL. The longer lines seemed to fit better in this one and really add to it, and the ending is absolutely perfect and kind of creepy. I think it's weakest in the middle, but even there it's good poetry. Adding it to my favorites.

Again, nice use of boldings and italics. I don't like this quite as much as SuicidaL, but it's still good work.