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| Thenardier 2007-09-08 ch 1,  | abuseThis piece just blew me away. It's so provocative, heartening, enlightening, with a tinge of jealousy perhaps? To me, this is one of the best haikus of this genre I ever read. This is definitely going into my faves, and since I've enjoyed countless other haikus from you, you're definitely going under my fave auther list. You certainly don't disappoint. Nice one! |
| Basara 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abusehm... for the gods are already eternal... nice... |
| Nemonus 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseAh ha, is this about the responsibility which must come with religion? I like that point. I can't say I'm awesome at critiquing haikus but you've certainly managed to fit emotion and a mostly understandable point into the little space the form allows. Good. |