Aw, how sweet! I loved it!

After reading this about three times in a row, my mind can only come up with one thing to say: OH. MY. GOD. I think I love you. I'd ask you to marry me, but that would be creepy.
I am totally and completely blown away. This was just absolutely /amazing/. One day I honestly hope I'll be able to write like you.

As everyone said, it's sweet and cute and all that. But I love better the way the characters interact, yeah, it's a misunderstanding, but not a fatalistically dramatic one. It just heightens the moment when they finally kiss. Love that. Congrats on the great work.

Guh. JUst- WOnderful.
I love this story.
How you set it up, how the misunderstanding was perpetuated, and then the wonderful kisses. HEE. YAY THE KISSES.
*HUGS STORY*

:)) LOVED IT. It was so ... cute! :D

Aw, cute. Love it. Totally adorable.

Thanks for a great read

great stuff! i absolutely luv ur writing style!

Very cute!

Aw, this story is adorable.

Aw! This was so sweet. Silly William, Asterius was being quite obvious all along, really.

This was a great story. I really enjoy your writing. I hope to see more of it soon.

LOVED this! it was short and sweet and i couldn't help snickering the entire time 'coz it was just that cute. your descriptions and explanations were such that you were able to dive right into the meat of the story without going into tedious detail about the setup. and william is freaking adorable!

aww! how cute! really...ru going to contuine or no? u should. ^_^

-Dommy

Very sweet! I love all the confusion!

That was really sweet, I loved the both characters, you portrayed them very well; and somehow realistic, people are (me included) dense like that.