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Night's-Freedom 2009-12-02 . chapter 41
HI!
Just wanted to let you know that this is an amazing story and that I wish u gd luck with publication.
I cried like a baby at the end of this story but would like to say thank you because it encouraged me to send a message to someone that I've needed to for a while. So thank you :)
Have a gd week!
Hope all goes well for u in the future :)
BYE!!
x x x
katiepoo 2009-11-29 . chapter 42
that was extremly sad, i totally did not see that comming...if this did actually happen to you i am so very sorry for your loss. i had been reading it on and off for awhile but the end about made me cry yoou really are a fantastic writer
Myr 2009-11-29 . chapter 41
I cried like a damn baby. My tear ducts are dry heaving.
Elmo'z BFF 2009-11-26 . chapter 23
i love this!
fictionalxbliss 2009-11-23 . chapter 41
I don't know if I can read the sequel. I stayed up all night reading this and I didn't expect it to end this way. It was such a beautiful story. I'm not sure whether to hate you or love you right now. The end, my God. I'm bawling my eyes out over here.

I literally felt as if my heart was breaking right along with Jonnie's. It was physically painful for me to read the story to the end. This is a story, and not just any story. This is the kind of story that sticks with a person and makes an impact on their lives. Honestly, I have a heavy weight on my heart right now.

This story has touched my heart and there is no way possible that I could ever forget this. I became so attached to these characters within the first few chapters. It pains me to know this story was real and that real people had to suffer through this. I understand that these things really happen, but it was so hard to read. This last chapter is what really got to me. It hit a little too close to home.

Such a dreadfully beautiful story. You've done a very good job and I have to say that I admire you a great deal.
fictionalxbliss 2009-11-23 . chapter 39
Magical, dreamy, HOT. Yeah, that's Ryder. *swoons* Hehe!
fictionalxbliss 2009-11-23 . chapter 31
Ouch. This chapter made me cry, well the end anyway. :(
fictionalxbliss 2009-11-23 . chapter 23
Oh my goodness, I think thst was the best chapter yet. Hahaha!
fictionalxbliss 2009-11-23 . chapter 7
Hahaha! The ending was too cute. :)
fictionalxbliss 2009-11-22 . chapter 2
Lol. Well, this is getting interesting quickly. :)
Your Execution 2009-11-22 . chapter 41
Omg the end D: I loved this story, and having the realistic ending made it all the better. I dont think i will ever forget this story, it absolutely touched me. I loved it, thank you it was great.
Random Story Stalker 2009-11-22 . chapter 41
I was very moved by your story after reading it today. It was captivating, funny, full of amasing characters and story line. By the end I felt a bond with the story and I just want to thank you for that. I fell I should wish for everyone to have a happy ending but the finish showed me how life can truly be and feelings that people hold. Thanks for uploading this story for all to read.
Cristalake 2009-10-24 . chapter 13
Between you and I, I knew, I don't knw how but somehow I KINEW from chapter 1 that Jonnie and Ryder were gonna be together. My sixth-sense/relashionship-dar qas practically SCREAMING IT at me.
Cristalake 2009-10-24 . chapter 7
aw ^^ cute
Cristalake 2009-10-24 . chapter 2
lol! Such a funny chapter!
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