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Reviews For: Eternal Spring
nine iron
2007-09-02
ch 1, 		abuseGreat alliteration, like the way it pulses the flow for the end! building up well! As you know I am all about the flow (and ebb :D) of writing poetry.

Yours,

Nine_Iron (AKA Tom :D)
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