This was a beautiful one-shot. Really, you have a gift with words. The characterization is spot on and I love the idea that God is in each of us. It makes more sense to me than the other concepts, and I think you’ve captured this idea well.

Wow. This is amazing. I love the characterisation and all of the emotion.

it is rare that i read a one-shot citrus story as artfully written as this one. good job!