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chaibffwitwwa 2009-09-11 . chapter 1
I like this story so far...I definitely can't wait to read the second chapter!
melon 2009-03-28 . chapter 21
I like it how the guys always joking around..
It always cools down the situation.

(that made my heart go DDR MAX…don’t ask why…)
LOL MAX!...LOL!..LOL!
(don't ask why...coz i understand...whyd u say that)
LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL TO THE MAX!
stt...i'm goin "Aw..." here...after i'm actually laughing out loud by myself in my room.

"He’s trying to kill me with his cuteness!!"
yeahh...u'r trying to kill me with Toru's cuteness!haha.

"I try not to blush and lose myself and go kiss him passionately. Well, maybe not too passionately. However I want to… haha…*ehm!"
Aw...hihihihihi..you should. ;p

*DYING of Toru's cuteness!a...a!

I wanna have a "Full House"!!
I WANT IT!
I wanna get married with my best friend..or shud i call it..my girlfriend..
melon 2009-03-28 . chapter 20
I'm surprised...wow..cool! hehehehe..
Shocking news.

*still surprise

LOL! to both parents...LOL TO THE MAX!!
That was brave...leaving their child.
To live in the same house without parents...
Geez...wanna trade parents? lol... =)

anyway...It is amazing story author!!
surprising plot.

I like it...wait...i don't like it...i LOVE it!!
hihihihihihi... ;)

hahh...here we go..last chapter...no...
it's about to end..hahaha.
all feelings jumbled. curious, excited, don't want it to end, etc..hehehe..

Good job!
melon 2009-03-28 . chapter 19
"Since I would never cheat on somebody. I would be a fool to not be happy with what I have"
WOW!! Ami!!...*sparkling eyes in amazement.
I have to agree with that.
I don't wanna cheat on someone i love =)
melon 2009-03-28 . chapter 18
It's interesting how you "build up" all about Shu..yet still not telling us who is he..
Very "torturing" the reader..yet it get us even more interested.
BRAVO!...haha.

..Aw...that was so sweet of Toru. Introducing his gf to a girl who wanna ask him out.. =)

agree with Toru.. “How exactly is your relationship with Shu?”
yeah!!...tell me!

and..what?gr...ami!! what kinda answer was that.
Toru deserve to know!...hah.

Bravo author..! nice work.. =)
melon 2009-03-28 . chapter 17
...what is goukon?

Aw...tis so sweet that yusuke told everything about miku.

and i knew it! That they're going to meet shu.
It's getting even more interesting here...hehehe.
I wana know how Toru will react.
I like his "cutie jealous"...hihihihi.
melon 2009-03-28 . chapter 16
For me...I think it's not weird to suddenly come to toru and share about my ex.
coz, u know..ur ex is always a sensitive issue for ur bf/gf.
So, they deserve to know before anything happen.
Like 'shu'.
altho..it's not good if you tell him within one week of relationship. but they are already in a month relationship.
Although it'll be even better if you tell him when u were just friends. hehehe.

"thank Yuu for that."-> it's funny! LOL

Aw...to Toru..hihi.
I think he doesnt wanna get 'beaten' by ami's ex.
(well..for sure!!lol..)

wait a minute..u said..shu is not ami's ex?
So..who is he??hm..
melon 2009-03-28 . chapter 15
"In the end, I succeeded in making a stupid conversation about bathing and leaving the kitchen"
hihihi..so you. smart enough to melt the situation by changing into an unimportant funny subject.

and whoa..that was a lot of emotions.
cool!..first argument.
i can feel toru's feeling.
i can say that..i will react the same if i were in that situaion.
and a bit dissapointed with what ami did.
i mean...she didn't explain anything about 'shu' to toru.
and she didn't understand the jealousy of his bf who had a bad past with a girl who broke his heart.

well..hehehe..cool plot.
Life is not adventurous if you don't have any argument or problem. plus...u won't be able to learn if u don't have those. =)
melon 2009-03-26 . chapter 14
"Wow, won’t her cheeks be numb by now?"
LOL!hahaha...
I'm imagining she smiles like forever...hehe

"‘you better hurry up before I’m going to do something that I read in my books that I’m sure you won’t like."
hahahahaa..u're going to do what??
do something i read in my books.
LOL!! its really one very interesting thought to me.
how cud u come out with that one??
i really like it!shud i say..amazingly funny line??
well..for me. =)

i really wana see toru's puppy eyes!!
can u draw it for me??hehehe

since u'r talking about food there...i forgot to ask..
what is takoyaki?what's it like??
sounds delicious tho..=P

..aw..so miku and yusuke are couple now?
GREAT! I like those 2couples.
sweet.

its kinda..well...stupid when yusuke thought that miku say yes to him by not going home.
but i can see why he assumed that.
well..clearly yusuke understand the situation..while miku was still wondering and panicking..hahaha.
so naive of miku who reads books..and loves story.
hehehe.

those 2guys are smart! =P
they understand things.

gah!! i will continue my reading tomorrow.

interesting way to end a story...but...argh..i hate it..LOL!
melon 2009-03-26 . chapter 13
HAHAHAHAHA!
HE nailed it!! Toru nailed it!!
I like him!
he's like...acting foolish and doesnt care and else..but he realizes things. romantic things.
“Hey, of course I know that kind of things. Otherwise, how would I know that you like me when we first met?” He replied, looking proud of himself while boasting his chest.

hahahaha!! GO TORU!lol...

“Ami-chan . . . I’m hungry . . . let’s eat our lunch.” Toru whined as he pouts and flashes his eyelids at me. He looks so cute that I want to squeeze his cheeks. Ah, lucky me having Toru-kun as my boyfriend.
...aw...makes me wana squeeze his cheecks too!lol.

and this -> "(Gulp!) Oh, boy."
hihihihi...somehow funny.
melon 2009-03-26 . chapter 12
I like it the fact that...toru act like he doesnt care..i mean..not that he doesnt care..but u know...

"I would’ve ‘accidentally’ pushed Yusuke and they would ‘accidentally’ kiss. "
that is really a wonderful plan!!..hahahaha..
i once did that in real life.
khekhekhekhe *evil grin

"Muahahahahaha . . . my evil laughter . . . what? It sounded evil."
it so funny!hahaha..idk why..but it is funny.

and i imagine when toru made his baby face..LOL..
aw...so sweet of him.
i like it how he's being "doesnt care about things but still lovely"


aite..way to go...reading...
melon 2009-03-26 . chapter 11
I like it how the sensei break in the "almost victorial" situation of toru.

when..
“Oh, no it’s not.” Hiroya-sensei destroyed Toru’s satisfaction.

hehe..it also destroyed my satisfaction.
(like right now...yeah..literally right now..when i thought i can have my honey...but someone is barging in!ARGHH!)

oh well..i got my satiisfaction back tho when toru really won it.
melon 2009-03-26 . chapter 10
the fact that u call it ‘love-love’ moment...makes me go aaw..so sweet of you.hahaha.

So.Yuki really has just started the world war I.
Here comes the Biatch.hehehe.(excuse the word)

ha~ thank God i read the story now..where i can still read the next chapter right way without waiting what's to come.
Otherwise i'll bother u like hell to finish the story.hehehehe!

Let me continue my reading to the next chapter u have =)

ps: awesome way to end this chapter..sux for the people who were waiting..hihihihi *evil grin
melon 2009-03-26 . chapter 9
it gets more and more interesting.
Lot of emotions going on.
love how the story goes so far.
I like the whole idea of "NO, i don't like him, I love him!"
i think it's so sweet.

and did he kissed her twice or not?
i mean..first when.."Suddenly Satoru pulled me in and gently touch his lips with mine"
and then...
“Well, we could combine it together... I wouldn’t be able to kiss you.” And he planted a peck on my lips causing me to blush.
so..twice??
SWEET!hehehehe..like it.

and i think its kinda romantic how he kissed her.
i mean..of course its not the most preferable situation to kiss someone u like or love..but..have him kissing in front of his stupid ex...its kinda...ROCK ON!!lol..
and having him kissing u while he's nervous try to get back to the "normal" situation...i think its sweet.

To be honest..the whole Yuki thing..reminds me of my ex.hehe.oh well. i once in that kinda situation...so, yeah. i think i understand Ami's feeling.

yeah..and I 100% agree with u..how BF and GF should be just like friends but in love..i think it suppose to be like that.

thanks..i got more info about all the Japanese thingy.hehe.
(well..i know nothing like all the manga or anime lover)
melon 2009-03-26 . chapter 8
great!...she likes him =)
i believe he likes her too...

and...hmm...u do know japan very well huh?
"close to the train station so it’s easy for me to go shopping in Shibuya or other places.”
I don't know if its just some made up fact.
Sure it sounds pretty real to me.hehehe.

I don't know anything about japan..well..maybe i do..but only general knowledge. =)
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