Oh wow, so very creative. I really like the formatting (even if it isn't quite how you wanted it). It adds something extra to the poem. For me, it seems to be about how on the surface everything may seem pretty and perfect, but you have no idea how a person actually feels and what is really happening down below. I hope thats what you were going for.

michelle

Oh my God!You're killing the ?Hehe...gives me a nice vision of some murderous person who can't get their hands on a real human and uses a doll to take out his or her nice wording.

"Dress her up

Slice her down"

I like the use of polar opposites that seem to express the hopelessness of putting on a fake face for others.

I would have liked to see the original formatting.

The repetition of "little dolly" gives it a lyrical almost nursery rhyme feel that brings into focus the harsh words.

Very nice.

-J.A.

I thought this was really great! I loved it!

GREAT JOB! lol