From 'as a starlit' on is amazing. Poetic drumming is amazing, too, just in a different and more vague sort of way.

I truly love your form.

Felicia.

p.s. Would you mind an interview for my project? I think it'll be ok, seeing as your form is related to my project, but I'd have to ask...

Wow, that is beautiful. I love how I can both hear and feel the drumming from the first line. Such philosophy, too, as usual. Just gorgeous. Keep writing! :)