a very good story. it all seems very real the way you describe everything. it also has a clear message for self-exceptance and dealing with emotional stress...actually, admittedly I have sort of occasionally gone out walking/running during the night, very interesting experiences indeed

keep up the good work

I thought the story was good eventhough you said it wasn't your best. I sometimes feel that way to and its always good to just get up and begin a new day. Everything was so descriptive, I felt like I could almost live in the story, well the moment cause it seemed so real the way you wrote it. Hope to read more of your stories soon, I think they are sometimes inspiring to me.

Umm.. Wow. That was pretty well written.. I'm just kind of confused at where it was going.

I liked the description of everything.. But more or less, it felt like I was reading an excerpt, and I only got a little bit of the meaning. Truthfully, I myself am not great at interpretation, but, I still felt like a lot was left unexplained. Of course, me being myself, I understand it anyways, Because of conversations we've had.

Anywho.

Well Written,
And I suppose it's best a lot of those things went unexplained.


Kelson