Reviews for Of Demeter and Persephone

Thenardier 2007-09-08 ch 1,	abuseAbsolutely enchanting. It's rhyme, rhythmn and structure are all impeccable. I love your style and I believe this poem is a beautiful replication of that wonderful myth. Once again, a fave.
Jeanie Gordon 2007-09-03 ch 1,	abuseOoh, this is oen of my favorite myths. :D That's cool that you wrote a poem on it. You did it justice.
Carleon 2007-09-03 ch 1,	abuseQuite excellent. You've kept a perfect syllable count per line, and the enjambs are very smooth. My only problem is that there appears to be a hint of forced rhyming in stanzas three and seven. Also, "plaited tears" seems rather an odd expression to use. But apart from those purely subjective suggestions, I find this poem very, very good, especially technically. It's nice to know that people still write in the old school of form, rhyme and metre.
Ramenluver 2007-09-02 ch 1,	abuse...Seriously, how do you think of this stuff? I'm speechless.