Really nice. I loved how it sounded, how I thought it would have sounded anyway. I actually sang it to myself and it was probably nothing like you wanted it to sound. But I thought it was really nice (not my singing, the song :) regardless. So once again, great job, keep it up.

wow, this is beautiful. i love the last 4 lines. it reminds me alot of myself. so powerful and un-nerveing. great job.

This are beautiful lyrics. The rhyming and flow seems very natural, it's just perfect. Nice job.

And thanks for the review!

Rowan.

very good. when i sang to it, it sounded really put togethre good. good work and keep on writing.

*favortied*

Awesome Job on this song! The lines "and I've never, I've never let you down but you've always, you've always brought me down" got stuck in my head so bad lol I'm not sure how.

..Yeah, I'm adding this to my favs :) Again, awesome job