:O That was so heartfelt! It sounded so bitter, so angsty (to me..).. I love the emotion you put into it, and the parting line was just freaking awesome. I think you did a great job on this, dearie! Another addition to The Reviews Lounge :)

-Irony

Aww, this is so sad... Very sincere and heartfelt. I like it. :)

This poem is true for many american teens. They search for love, they want it now, and they can't wait so they try and find someone who will give them 'love'. It usually ends up that someone gets hurt...someone must have the pain and burden.