I loved this one! Going to the next

Oooooooohhhhhhhhh *anticipation*

This is a very unique and interesting story. It captured my attention from the very beginning. Great job!

Great story you've written! I like the change of POV in this chappie. On to the next book!

Whaaaaat...

WHHHHHAAT

Just when I was starting to like the kid, too j-j

Wow, I loved reading this story. It was enchanting, thrilling, mysterious, and just plain awesomeness! I especially liked the epilogue where we get a glimpse of what Azri feels toward Cale. Cale is such a sweetie and I feel so bad about Ellicor's death. I hope there's a happy ending to this series (hopefully with Cale and Azri together?).

It wouldn't surprise me if Azri had the antidote all along.

Absolutely fantastic. An exquisite piece of work so far, if may say. I look forward to what comes next. I love how you are building the plot and how you have build the characters. I was a huge fan of Ellicor, so I am saddened to see him go, but his departure was understandable and written lovely. I really enjoy your writing-it is quite fluid. Great job, thanks for posting!

About midway through the chapter:

"I can't life my arms," I complained.

Great story! I love the description

THIS IS AMAZING!

LOL. He's just soo horny that he's even started lusting after girls.

Jesus, the sexual tension is crazy! And so delicious :)

Hey there! My name's Rosie from a website called A Drop of Romeo, and I'm happy to say that your story has been added to our archive under the category of Slash! Here's your review:

Rosie Thinks: 'The Poisoner's Ring' had me completely and utterly hooked the entire way through. It does combine my two favourite genres, after all: slash and fantasy! The summary looked like I'd hit the jackpot and the rest of the story didn't disappoint. Due to being accidentally poisoned by Azri, Cale is dragged along with Azri and his travelling companion to find the cure in the capital city before he dies of it. And, to add to the situation, Cale can't help but feel an instant attraction to the mysterious Poisoner (Azri).

I loved both the main characters and thought they were characterised beautifully - they both had flaws and were realistic, for their situations. The chemistry between the two of them was noticeable and sizzling, and their developing relationship enthralled me. Well, the entire storyline enthralled me! The plot is completely original and different from the many other fantasy novels I've read. This means that it definitely stands out in my mind. This story really did deserve winning the SKoW Judge's Pick for Best Original Universe. Although the world is not described in great detail, it is built up in small snippets so by the end, I had a good idea of the world FreezingRayne has created and how it works.

The descriptions are well detailed but they don't overshadow the story line. FreezingRayne has a talent for describing the action clearly and succinctly. There were some inconsistencies with the dialogue's language, as it seemed to get less formal towards the end, but it wasn't overly noticeable. However I should warn you that although there is a sequel, it hasn't been updated in a few years. This didn't stop me from enjoying it, however!

Keep it in! It's somewhat disturbing, but that's all cool with me!

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