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| Chidori Nadare 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abusePowerful details, with a hint of horror in it. The imagery felt like I was watching a good movie. Keep up the good work. -C.N |
| Ashelin 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseThe monster is a little more than horrific. *shivers* I hate ignorance. Some people don't think it's that bad, and maybe it isn't...but I just hate it. Another wonderful poem. |
| perpetual questions 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseWonderful metaphors, and beautiful phrasing. Nice. |
| Queen of Dragonnor 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseThis poem was interesting to read. I like the language you used, along with the descriptions. |
| Faithless Juliet 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseYou have really powerful detail in this; I loved the imagery throughout, it was almost like walking through a fantasy novel. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |