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Reviews For: Rose Petal Eyelids

Chidori Nadare
2007-09-07
ch 1,
abusePowerful details, with a hint of horror in it. The imagery felt like I was watching a good movie. Keep up the good work.

-C.N
Ashelin
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseThe monster is a little more than horrific. *shivers* I hate ignorance. Some people don't think it's that bad, and maybe it isn't...but I just hate it. Another wonderful poem.
perpetual questions
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseWonderful metaphors, and beautiful phrasing. Nice.
Queen of Dragonnor
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseThis poem was interesting to read. I like the language you used, along with the descriptions.
Faithless Juliet
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseYou have really powerful detail in this; I loved the imagery throughout, it was almost like walking through a fantasy novel. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.
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