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hime1221 2007-09-16 . chapter 1
I've felt the same way b4...nice!
Chidori Nadare 2007-09-07 . chapter 1
Another way to see the word believe. The ending slapped me in the face. A bit harsh, but true. Good job! Keep writing!

-C.N
Daiysis 2007-09-03 . chapter 1
Definitely a powerful message here. The last line is what really opened up my eyes... "Smile at me and lie." Another wonderful piece ^_^
Ashelin 2007-09-02 . chapter 1
I hate people who lie to me. They don't do any good in the end. Great haiku. And thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it.

:]
a silenced revolution 2007-09-02 . chapter 1
For some reason, I rather like the ending. Not sure why... Anyway, nice haiku.
Faithless Juliet 2007-09-02 . chapter 1
Powerful emotions in this, I really enjoyed the read through - I loved how you interpreted 'believe' very unique. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.
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