This is very pure writing, I loved the way you've put this in words. Great, keep it up!

jojoba-music-girl

wow. . . this is an excellent poem. Wording is awesome, and it's raw. Real. Keep it up.

Faith

i don't quite understand why the second genre is tagedy, but moving on ;

the last stanza is gorgeous, and again i have a favorite line:

'he stole the noise from your throat'.

your the first boy-poet i've seen on fictinpress.

well, that's indicated their gender.

congratulations - you give boy-poets a good name.

P

This is just amazing. It's breathtaking.

It's beautiful.

Awesome.

this is drop. dead. gorgeous.

it's the first time in a while i've been breathless.

i love every minute of it. especially the last five lines. fxcking beautiful.