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| jojoba-music-girl 2007-09-06 ch 1,  | abuseThis is very pure writing, I loved the way you've put this in words. Great, keep it up! jojoba-music-girl |
| Faith Adeline 2007-09-05 ch 1, | abusewow. . . this is an excellent poem. Wording is awesome, and it's raw. Real. Keep it up. Faith |
| rippinghouse 2007-09-05 ch 1, | abusei don't quite understand why the second genre is tagedy, but moving on ; the last stanza is gorgeous, and again i have a favorite line: 'he stole the noise from your throat'. your the first boy-poet i've seen on fictinpress. well, that's indicated their gender. congratulations - you give boy-poets a good name. =P |
| Carnival Casualties 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is just amazing. It's breathtaking. It's beautiful. Awesome. |
| riotmaker 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abusethis is drop. dead. gorgeous. it's the first time in a while i've been breathless. i love every minute of it. especially the last five lines. fxcking beautiful. ♥ |