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| glamoureste 2008-05-02 ch 19,  | abuseAW... THAT WAS ADORABLE! I demand a sequel! :] |
| CaliGirls.AtHeart 2008-03-24 ch 19, | abuseomg...u must do a sequel for it. i loved it soo much |
| heavenly-princess- 2008-03-10 ch 19, | abusehey there I lived this story so much i would love a squal were they end up togther, and not one of them moving away |
| sweets555 2008-02-26 ch 19, | abusei absolutely adore it. great job! |
| Vinyl Cupcake 2008-01-26 ch 19, | abuseOh my god. I'm sobbing like a baby. *in between sobs* I need a sequal! I repeat- I need a sequal! |
| shy green rock 2008-01-24 ch 19, | abuseWOW Here I thought it was going to end up happy with them together and all, but I guess I felt like you ruched the end. The last two chapters did seem rushed. But I do want a sequel, so please do one. |
| toazdo 2008-01-21 ch 19, | abuseWhat?? Separated forever? Can't he just move there and then they'll see each other again later on? Like maybe after a few years.. Are you going to write a sequel? Please do! They can't not see each other again. That would just suck. And what about Keeva and JJ? Argh!! Sequel please? I love this story but you can't leave us hanging like that! |
| hazza1508 2008-01-21 ch 19, | abuseyou have to write the sequal itll be so good |
| bernardino 2007-12-16 ch 19, | abusewrite a sequel! i can't accept the fact that the 2 of them would be seperated FOREVER! what happens to phoebe? and bianca? and steven? and Keeva and J.J. ? nice story, despite of the unfortubate ending... |
| bernardino 2007-12-16 ch 7, | abusei love the song My Guardian Angel... seriously, i've been sining the song over and over again, which may be the cause of the really heavy rain in our country.. |
| cls81690 2007-11-27 ch 19, | abuseWow, I liked this. It was great. Things moved too quickly (hate into love in one chapter?) and some editing is in order, but there's a good basis. I hope you re-write this someday, really working on turning it into a fully fleshed-out story. We don't hear much about Chayanne's past, for example, and we really only hear a little about Tyler's. Give us more details--about everything. Great job on this. |
| LadySara05 2007-11-04 ch 19, | abusethats such a cute story. i really enjoyed reading it. you wrote it really well. I'm going to go read the sequel now :) Sara |
| Singers To The Back 2007-10-24 ch 15, | abuseIronic..I've been listening to this song and suddenly Tyler sings it Haha I just love that song&this story ! |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2007-10-07 ch 6, | abusehee hee hee! good story! |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseHm..interesting prologue... |