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.love.me.kiss.me.hate.me.
2007-09-03
ch 1,
abuse*This I despair more than you. I suggest Microsoft Word because it has spellcheck. I practically live there, ha ha. Anyhow. That was also my favorite line. It's short and simple and could probably stand to have more added to it, but it's a nice poem. Good job.
Princess-anna57
2007-09-03
ch 1,
abuseYou'll need to edit this piece to make it clearer as I don't understand it. :( Use spellcheck for spelling mistakes too, yup? :) Keep at it.

~Anna~ ^_^
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