aw. i thought she was gonna marry him instead! nice twist.

That was so incredibly sad.

It was the best ending for a one-shot I have read in a long time.

But AH the sadness.

It's different. I'm glad they didn't end up with each other. Such selfish whorebags! Hahahha Don't know why - I feel a little bit pissed off after reading this one shot.

I think you should do 2 more shots of this. What happens in the future?

Anyway, very cool and succinct.

heyy nat

this was pretty good, it was really different because it was in present tense, but yeah...

shes a bitch. hahaha - well maybe i'm a little biased

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