I think it's rather cute... and I like that Alex went out of his way to torture his friend it was fun to read. And I like happy stories, so it was good!

A few your that should be you're and sense that should be since.

It's about time they realized how the other felt.

Lovely story, so sad it was short.

This was fun! I was so sure for a minute that Riory didn't really have a crush on Alex & was just uncomfortable b/c he had noticed Alex noticing _him_! Great story, though, very cute.

Cute story and realistic characters with actual PERSONALITIES.
And hey, this ending had the right amount of sappyness, dont worry.

I find it terribly amusing to imagine how bad you blushed while writting the sex scene...

I LOVE IT!! lol

perfect length, GREAT character interaction (besides the sex lol)

all in all, this was as close to perfect as you can get

ill be reading your stuff from now on =)

you think its sappy but nevertheless its sweet..~ah give me all the fuzzy lovey feeling in my body..hurm..love it!^_~

I have read alot of slash and written some too and this was a good story. The guys acted like real teenagers and it was believable. I liked the characters you created and there is nothing wrong with a nice sappy ending - most people do read for the ability to escape their daily lives. I hope you continue writing. A few typos but otherwise a great job. :)

that was SO amazing! the best slash I've ever read. I started reading from a recemendation (sp?) from my friend, and she loves it, too. great job!!

Loved this!

Holy crap that rocked! I loved your characters! I enjoyed your sappy ending. :)

i loved this story. the ending wasn't so sappy. i really loved this storyr it was awsome and really sweet. ur a great writer!

That was lovely! I really liked it!