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| Monelisa 2008-07-23 ch 23, | abuseI'm officially in love with Quentin ... I loved this one so much more than the Alex and Adrian story ... ugh! I will be dreaming of this haha, I can relate so well to this. My boyfriend and I are high school sweethearts that came from VERY different groups lol Its working about more than 2 years so far so i love how this story sounds so much more promising =] Awesome, congrats to you and bless you for your talent! Please ... go make a movie out of this hahahaha |
| atticflower 2008-07-18 ch 23, | abuseAnother great story from an awesome author! Like someone said before me, I simply adored the nicknames that Quentin made up for Devon. As a character, he was really fun to read. And gosh, if you do write a sequel about Grant and Nicky I just might die from excitement |
| funsize 2008-07-18 ch 23, | abusethi is the fourth time i've read this story.. ah... you are definitely my favourite writer on fictionpress. i love every single one of your stories.. this ones my fave though |
| xSilentTearsx 2008-07-17 ch 23, | abuseI don't think I have ever laughed so hard! LMAO =D Thanks for writing this hilarious and sappy story! You are a genius! |
| Ouija 2008-07-16 ch 23, anon. | abuseTons have probably asked this, but if there is another River Valley, who will be Grant's lead female interest? |
| Ocean's pebble 2008-07-13 ch 23, | abuseI like it!! The re-write really helped, it totally shows off more of Quentin and Devon's relationship. Tis awesome!! I love the whole date. The only thing that I'm disappointed in is the fact that the scene where Quentin says something about taking off his shirt again and Devon tells him that he better not because her mother will hear and he backs down almost immediately and she says that he can't be frightened of her mother THAT mush and he says that yes, yes he is and it's funny. Crap, that was a long sentence. Anywho, keep writing, I loves your work!! XD |
| Shiva 2008-07-11 ch 23, anon. | abuseI love the nicknames Quentin creates for Devon. He's such a cutie and she's so lucky. It would be VERY funny if you did a story about Meg and Isaac! When they get older, I mean. Think about the possibilities...;) Well, if you write about Grant and Nicky it would be very cute too. Hell, if you write anything I will be so happy. I love your writing, but I think it'll be very difficult to create another character better then Quentin. He's amazing^^ |
| God's worst mistake 2008-07-10 ch 23, | abuseI think I've read practically all the texts you had written on fictionpress, but I admit this one is most certainly the funniest of all (I think I can be trusted, it managed to make me laugh at 2 in the morning. Whole night, actually, 'cause I wouldn't stop reading until it ended ^^) Quentin is just amazingly funny. I really enjoy your writing style (not sure that's exactly the way you say it in english, but anyway...) and hope that there will be other wonderful texts to follow (already a sox in a bow fan !) |
| chouchou 2008-07-10 ch 23, | abuseQuentin is such a cutie. I'm in love! |
| caralene 2008-07-10 ch 23, | abuseThis is way, way better than the other one... :-) |
| AmareAgape 2008-07-08 ch 23, | abuseOMG. A story about a Korean! |
| Dayaja 2008-07-02 ch 23, | abuseGOOD Grant and Nicky would make me deliriously happy! |
| Writing4Eternity 2008-06-29 ch 19, | abuseI'm glad you did an interracial story. You don't see too much of those nowadays. (: |
| justen 2008-06-27 ch 23, anon. | abuseI agree! After having read the revised ending, the original one seems a bit rushed. I'm glad you changed it. I enjoyed it very much - so, thank you! I think Quentin might even be my favourite character of yours. ^^ I do not intend to bug you about it, but I'd really like to hear more from the river valley group. So I'm all for the Grant/Nicky sequel. I hope you'll find the time and inspiration to write it eventually. |
| :] 2008-06-26 ch 23, anon. | abuseTo be honest, I like this story the best so far. In my opinion, your are the best out of all the fictionpress stories. Can't wait to read your future stories. I read the previews and all of them looked very interesting, especially the Isaac one, but i'll be happy with the Nicky/Grant one too. best wishes :] |