Reviews for Trouble Starts With a Q

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hulha 2008-05-15 ch 22, anon.	abuseyay!
bittersweet memory 2008-05-15 ch 22,	abuseyay the dinner! very impressive writing; it was very...very...traumatic for quentin, and extremely entertaining for me =D you got the humor and the seriousness across all at once, and that was quite nice to read. i was wondering if/how you plan your stories...do you outline? and also, how do you find inspiration to start? i have all sorts of ideas but never where to start...any advice would be appreciated!
x3life 2008-05-15 ch 22,	abuseaw i liked this re-write =) totally looking forward to the next part!! and the date and stuff
Baelles 2008-05-15 ch 22,	abuseHey there! I used to be SoFarDown so this isn't my first review. =D But oh, oh, oh! I'm so glad it's not over! I'm much too taken with Quentin to let him go just yet. I can't wait for their date! -shakes head- If you think /Devon's/ parents are bad...If it were my parents, Quentin would have left the house crying. =/ Anyhow, I'm just really glad to read more from you. =D Quentin always makes me smile.
R.P. Sawyer 2008-05-15 ch 22,	abuseAhahaha! And they can only get better :) I am so excited that you are continuing with this story. I loved the ending you had but these characters are just too amazing to let go of- I'm sure you know that- but I am truly glad (elated, ecstatic, etc.) that you are continuing with this story. What made you change your mind? I was sad to see them go last time and I will be again, but I get more Quentin time and that makes me SO happy! It's a wonderful start to the summer ;) Keep up the amazing work on all your stories and I will be VERY glad to see if you make your other River Valley story. I would love to hear Grant's history. I bet it would be fun to write his p.o.v. as well. :) Yay for Quentin though. He makes me smile. -P.Sawyer
Repair My Wings 2008-05-15 ch 22,	abuseReally nice. I'm glad this story isnt over yet it's really good. Are Mr and Mrs Maxwell going to show up again? Or was their apperance a one time thing? One small issue i noticed. "Mom," Devon said in a low voice. Her hands curled into fists under the table, but short of hitting her mother with a frying pan, there wasn't anything she could do to stop this so-called dinner masquerading as an interrogation. "...this so called dinner masquerading as an interrogation" reads like the dinner was pretending to be an interrogation rather than the other way around. Perhaps another way to phrase it would be "...this interrogation masked by a dinner." Or something similar. I'm looking foreward to more of the story!
Teegan Lee 2008-05-15 ch 22, anon.	abuseits great
Myztique 2008-05-15 ch 22,	abuseyay! i can't wait to hear grant's story!
aurora borealis 2008-05-15 ch 22,	abuseAw. They're too cute for their own good. :) And Devon's mum is... well, as Quentin so aptly put it, "a male-eating demon spawned from the foulest hell". But she loves her children, so it's okay. ;) Can't wait to read more. And I'll support any pending River Valley projects you might have! :)
katie valentine 2008-05-15 ch 22,	abuseim real curious as to what quentin has planned for the date! :D
dream6-20 2008-05-15 ch 22,	abuseYay! Haha. I had fun re-reading that infamous dinner scene. Mrs. Kim is the best! I can't wait till the next chapter. It's probably gonna be mushy with the date and all, but hey, no one's complaining. =) And a few more chapters with Dev and Quentin would be definitely be a wonderful treat. Btw, when are you updating Sox in a Box? ;)
chocolatechipash 2008-05-15 ch 22,	abusenice work, very intresting. its really similar to last time though how come you rewrote it? anyway im glad theres more anyway. update soon
Hellcat81 2008-05-15 ch 22,	abusei am looking so much forward to more wording duells between q and dev's mom. i hope that one day they will be even in their talking and that the mom will be actually enjoy discussing with quentin or sth. like that. like an acceptance under the pretense of dislike? i don't know. anyway how come you know so much about how koreans are? oh, will i also get to see some interaction with the infamous jimmy? that would be cool. anyway, i'm looking forward to the date.
simplicity is complex 2008-05-15 ch 22,	abusewhoo. the asian parent inquisition > spanish inquisition. maybe you should do an "older siblings inquisition" next time. my sisters have prepared 100 MCQ for my poor future boyfriend to fill in. if he doesn't pass he gets chased out with a broom. if he does, he goes on to the next level.. the interview of doom. HAHAHAHA. i love love love quentin! he stuck his neck out there for her. and devon's mum was so.. typically asian with all the funny questions people never want to know. roar. HE SURVIVED THE BIG BAD PARENT!
J.C. Lyn 2008-05-15 ch 22,	abuseMrs. Kim is funny. Yeah. Real jackasses in real life won't hesitate to smack you.

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