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| totallyinspired 2008-05-29 ch 1,  | abuseThis is so beautiful and it has really great rhythm. And once again, the rhyme! I just can't live without rhyming poems, and you rhyme them gorgeously. Also I'm proud to say I know what "zephyr" means :-p |
| Thenardier 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, extremely enchanting. Transported me to a faraway place. I love this profusely. Fave story, and a definite fave author. Good work! |
| ThETrutHAbouTCaseY 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abusewell done. does all your poetry rhyme? ever tried not rhyming, free verse? once again, excellent write, I wouldn't chaneg a thing |
| Charlotte Crane 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseI like this allot. The words are so pretty and it flows perfectly. |
| BelovedOfAslan 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! The count and rhyme of the lines was perfect -- had the definite feel of a song. |
| Jeanie Gordon 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseEnchanting. :) I love your work. |
| Ramenluver 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseLike how you ended it with 'night'. For some reason, it gives a certain finality to it. Another favorite. :) -Ramen |