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Praetoria
2007-09-03
ch 1,
abuseI love the rhyming. You did a terrific job of finding just the right words to make the poem sound authentic. That is a very difficult thing to do sometimes. The imagery is just gorgeous, and the entire thing is beautifully-written. Well done.
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