I will say that this was a nice contrast to your first two poems, which I thought were quite weak. Their rhymes were very forced; this one had passable flow and rhythm.

It gave me shivers and made me want to snuggle up next to the fire or something. It seemed very innocent, especially the title 'Water in the sky.' I love your work!

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CL

This is really powerful. It sounds a lot like a Psalm. You have such a gift with words. Lucky!

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CL

Awesome write! Keep'em coming.

Very nice. Well written as well. Keep up the great work. God Bless.

Very, very well written. Great use of figures of speech, and it had a good rythmic flow to it!