|Reviews for 1second of my LIfe|
| lost for words 10/21/07 . chapter 1
I love the rant-like style of this poem. The words all seem very clear and distinct, but they run together into something larger and intriguing, like a poetic fever. If that makes sense. Great job.
| xDancingintheRainx 10/19/07 . chapter 1
The flow you used for this piece really worked nicely. The emotion is so strong its like you can cut it with a knife. Very genuine. Nicely done!
| Chidori Nadare 9/9/07 . chapter 1
It was weird but...good. Very river-like flow. Good job!
| tearing hands 9/8/07 . chapter 1
The poem flowed really well, I loved the rhythm. My favorite lines were "take my hate and desire and / set it on fire." The beginning and the ending are perfect, especially the ending.
| theatrical rhapsodies 9/3/07 . chapter 1
Very very good, I love the first line, "i’m drowning in your faithlessness"
When I was reading this I got the strangest feeling of deja vu
I don't know, it was weird.
Anyway, great poem.