Reviews for Sharpen Your Tongue

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Right or Ryn 2008-04-03 ch 8,	abuseHave to agree with the ooc bit. Twas a tad extreme.
Right or Ryn 2008-04-03 ch 2,	abuseI disagree. It's in the supernatural genre, so the believability in the "would this happen in real life" respect's thrown out the window. What does matter is how real the characters are and their response to learning about the supernatural. So far, Mildred is someone who's fun to read and completely believable. You have her voice down really well, too. I especially loved how she peaked a look at that note and then felt guilty for thinking bad things about Vronsky. I'm really interested to see where this goes.
Right or Ryn 2008-04-03 ch 1,	abuseGreat start here. And I love the summary you chose for the story - it really caught my eye.
Jack Argyle 2008-01-18 ch 9,	abuseOminous scab beacon. Yep, that's going to be my new insult from now on. For example, if someone goes around saying this story is terrible I'll be like "No it isn't you stupid scab beacon". Genius. Nice touch of rain in this chapter. 'A fine use of pathetic fallacy' I would say if I enjoyed the subject of English. In all honesty I'm going to have to take lessons from your writing structure and incorporate it into my own stories. Easy to follow and entertaining. I was hoping that, after my long absence, there would be more updates, but beggars can't be choosers I suppose...that's a lot of dots. And the next chappy is looking promising. People dressed up as animals at parties tend to go down very well. My friends and I turned up at an 18th dressed as furry woodland creatures; I was a squirrel and squirrels get all the chicks. Fact.
Rizzy 2007-12-30 ch 9,	abuseAH I'm charmed by this story, by a whole lot actually! The humor is just downright funny, very endearing. The characters are well characterized, and of course, I love the whole concept. I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm anxious to see if Sydney will see his girlfriend, and how Milly would handle that. I think she so likes him! haha
Rizzy 2007-12-30 ch 1,	abusewow! I finally had the chance to give this a read, and I'm delighted! A very interesting first chapter :D
Aleksy Lorraine 2007-12-28 ch 9,	abusePIGGY BACK RIDE! Della, darling, you had me rolling all over the floor with that one. And Sydney had a motorcycle? Ignoring the fact that he was a crappy driver, that's pretty badass! Damn, pretty much everything you write is oozing with witty goodness. ZOMPIRE INDEED!
AnnoyinglyClever 2007-12-21 ch 6,	abusehaha. the notFunky thing still cracks me up. this is genius. mil reminds me a lot of Zooey Deschanel. she's fantastic! don't have time to read the rest right now, but believe me, it will be read!
Leinnansidhe 2007-12-15 ch 9,	abuseYAY~ This was a damn good chapter! I had been waiting for this little exchange, the Zompire one. Though I still want to give Mil a sandwich, and have her not feel guilty about it. I loff you~!
SamanthaNicole 2007-12-14 ch 9,	abuseI have so much love for this story. The interaction between Mildred and Sydney is so great. I absolutely adore you.
Euphorialie 2007-12-13 ch 9,	abuseAnd everything is revealed! Well, not everything, but more than we knew before. I like this story's weirdness, it's perfect. I'm wondering when Sydney's old girlfriend is going to start creating issues, that'll be interesting. And Sydney's going to a rave dressed as the Easter Bunny? That promises to be very entertaining. I love how funny everyone in this is, they remind me of how random I am. So an update will be much appreciated, cause I can't wait for more Sydney and Mil!
Leinnansidhe 2007-11-27 ch 8,	abuseZOMGROFLMAOBBQ~! Or...er... yeah. This chapter makes my heart sing! It makes everything... Okay, let's not go down that road. Anyway, I freakin' loved this. I beyond loved this. I say love when I eat pizza pockets or get a movie for Christmas. I like, REALLY LOVE THIS. YEAH. “P.T.,” I growled, menacingly. “What?!” Sydney spun around and growled at me. “Oh, wait,” I singed, “They’re in my back pocket.” Oh my God, I laughed so hard when I read that line. That was amazing. And good twists in this chapter too! Yay!
SamanthaNicole 2007-11-27 ch 8,	abuseYay, update! Trust me, I know how hard it is to find time to work on your stories. My main project has been on hold for over a month, since I got bogged down with homework. College can be such a ** sometimes. Anyway. Nice to see you back! I wanted to smack those two children. Seriously. Doc reminded me of a girl I used to babysit who was literally the most unpleasant person I've ever met. I'm having a hard time remembering what we've learned about Ash so far. But if my memory serves me right, and I've interpreted this chapter correctly, were Doc and P.T. both dead, too? As always, I adore you and your writing. Can't wait to see what happens next! Cheers, Sammy
Leinnansidhe 2007-11-27 ch 7,	abuseGLEE! I love you too! Your writing is quirky and phenomomomomialzzpfft... Okay, that was probably the lamest cover-up for actually not being able to spell that word. But I love this story. Fer serious. Or SOMEthing... Nyaha. God, your character depth is sexcellent. Go you. I need to go read the next chapter.
Euphorialie 2007-11-26 ch 8,	abuseHa, the little kids were hilarious. I'll always have a soft spot for demonic children who are actually adults. And I loved Mil in this chapter, she was hilarious. With the cotton candy? I almost died. Best line ever, "Watch your language around her!" from P.T. the little kid who looks lots and lots younger than her. I almost went into cardiac arrest. Well, this was AMAZING, just like usual and, as always, I can't seem to wait for the next chapter. Especially where you left it! Are you trying to torture me? So...update!

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