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| Sententia 2008-07-13 ch 28,  | abuseThe plot and characters are pretty good. The plot is interesting and attention keeping. The writing its self isnt great but is still pretty good. As the author has stated this is written for fun so the writing is fine because the plot makes up for it. I am anticipating the next installment. I hope it is written quickly. :) |
| naokoangel01 2008-06-14 ch 28, | abuseOh my gosh This is a great story I cant wait for the next chapter :) |
| LastTrueKnight 2008-06-03 ch 22, | abuseYay, Leo! I like Leo! I think he's my favorite. |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-05-30 ch 28, | abusenice cliffhanger. please update soon. your story is great and suspenseful. |
| Spotluver26 2008-05-24 ch 28, | abuseOk, but you can def. inprove. I hope Jayce is in the bloody room...alive. Write more soon Spirit |
| Dramaqueen-is-me-14 2008-05-24 ch 28, | abuseOh my god! What? Update soon! |
| Sapheneia 2008-05-24 ch 28, | abuseWHAT?!?! |
| Stormie_Daze 2008-05-24 ch 28, anon. | abuseCliff hanger... Dammit. |
| Estelin 2008-05-06 ch 27, | abusethis story was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait to read more. |
| Deafgurl's world 2008-04-21 ch 27, | abuseWhat is going on here? Why is Jayce leave Maxime here? Why does Lucas want her for? Is this competition about marriage? Hurry update |
| Dramaqueen-is-me-14 2008-04-11 ch 27, | abuseOh My god! update soon! |
| PoorEnglishArtist 2008-04-11 ch 2, | abuseWell. I hate writing negative reviews, and always try to put something good in them, so here's my good comment: I really like the idea for the story. She is a stupid main chracter. Ditzy and all "omg, thank you, i love you even-though-you-kidnapped-me-and-by-all-rights-I-should-hate-you". It is truly stupid to have characters that don't act like real people. Did you even THINK about what Maxie might be thinking on getting kidnapped? Evidently not. Kool = cool atcully = actually |
| Spotluver26 2008-04-10 ch 27, | abuseHEY, omg he has her brothers. I feel so bad though about her and Jayce.(sp?) They make a good match, at least I thought so! :P write more soon. thank spirit |
| Sapheneia 2008-04-10 ch 27, | abuseEvil! And I'm glad that Jayce came to her but then he left and that made me sad! I hope he comes back soon! |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-04-10 ch 27, | abuseooh He has the brothers. Smart guy. I hope everything goes okay for her and for them. I hate it when they all call her baby. it sounds so stupid |