your reminded that your human... the yours should be you're

I like this a lot... the format is nice and I love the descriptions in the first stanza

To the point that it's so raw like you're screaming, yet no one hears you. It's good to see new works from you. I like the 'breathing breathlessly', where you italicized 'lessly'. It's like you're being suffocated. Very good job! Keep writing!

-C.N