wow. what's with the concoction? I would find that incredibley annoying. hm... a fairy? okay, that's definetly a new twist on things! Please write more soon!

he's a fairy! lol ah thats classic ;) Shame he's not a different type of fairy... maybe he could be a "queen" too... ^_^

I love how he looks like such a great hero. Why isn't he more 'friendly' with her? Poor her. I laughed out loud at the whole 'he better not have touched my new quill' part. that was really funny. thanks for posting. Update soon

I read this part late at night in my room and it gave me the creeps. Congrads, you envoked fear in me and ruined the option of sleep for at least 20 minutes!!- In a way that is good on your part. =]

Please post more! this is getting so interesting. I really CAN NOT wait to read more of it. Great work!!

I'm loving this story. I can't wait for you to write more; I'm curious to know what was after Molly and will she ever be able to see Vincent?

sweet. I wonder what the curse is and how to break it...

another great chapter. please post more soon.

great beginning. I really like this story!! thanks for posting.

Makes me wanna go exploring. :)

I love it! What else can I say, except update soon. Please

Ok. You are a wicked Person(even though I'm not positive you're red headed. People lie on the internet)How could you be so CRUEL as to leave us with a cliff hanger! Write more soon. I COMMAND YOU! MWA HA HA! Ok over evil laughter now. But write soon please

That would be creepy, being kissed by something invisible.

I love that she's staring as he eats... should be interesting, haha. And aww we got an explanation! Nice. ;D

(I've also reached the conclusion the reason why Vincent is so nice/invisible is because a man so adorable doesn't exist. LOL)

I wonder what asylum's look like on the inside.