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| GreeChocoPurRai 2007-09-26 ch 5,  | abuselove the fic! cant wait for more :) |
| d666lisa 2007-09-21 ch 5, | abuseABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT, BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. PLEASE UPDATE SOON :) |
| liVe-yOuR-fAntAsy 2007-09-21 ch 5, | abuseGreat story! I love it! Update soon. |
| ihrtbks 2007-09-12 ch 4, | abuseJames still reminds me of Edward (speed demon), but that might just be because I finished Eclipse today! The library scene was interesting... UPDATE SOON! |
| r0b0tic vampir 2007-09-11 ch 4, | abuseM...it's funny the way Alia is oblivious that Bret likes her. Update more when you can and also update your other story as well, I love that one so much. |
| r0b0tic vampir 2007-09-09 ch 3, | abuseAlia does seem emotional, but I know for a fact that all girls have emotional break-down once in a while, so it's nice to Alia act this way even if she is a character. Loving the story so far, update more when you can. |
| xoxo1 2007-09-09 ch 3, | abuseugh, its buggin me that shes oblivious to bret liking her, lolz and i can relate to her, about being all emotional so is james an only child? |
| ihrtbks 2007-09-09 ch 3, | abuseI know I've already gone fangirl about James to you, but I adore his voice, especially the cynicism in it. I cannot wait to see what'll happen to Bret when James and Alia start acknowledging their feelings. You're being so mean to him...poor puppy dog. UPDATE SOON! |
| ihrtbks 2007-09-05 ch 2, | abuseSo both of them meet someone who's "different". Interesting. *whines* Bret can't have Alia because she's James. But Bret can have Bree! UPDATE SOON! |
| r0b0tic vampir 2007-09-05 ch 2, | abusehey, loved the chapter, I guess in a way James does seem like Edward, but not completely. |
| xoxo1 2007-09-05 ch 2, | abusewhy is james all nonsocial like that? any particular reason? and does bret like alia? |
| Reincarnated.Pink.Shoelace 2007-09-05 ch 2, | abuseonly 2 chapters done, and I'm already intrigued, can't wait to read more! |
| PerhapsAlaska 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abusethis sounds interesting. update soon! |
| ihrtbks 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseOh...pretty. This is a teal-room story for me...it's those mature pretty stories that always make me think of rooms with teal walls...don't know why. But this is beautifully written. I love how you describe his hair as dark bronze instead of brown. Kind of reminds me of Edward from Twilight, not that I'm suggesting anything. I'm dying to know how your leading male became so introverted and perceptive. UPDATE SOON! |
| r0b0tic vampir 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseHey, loving the story, please update soon. |