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| gigglebug 2008-01-23 ch 1,  | abuseBeautifully done, it must be said. Fantastic. =) Keep up the awesome work! |
| Aya SL 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, thats very powerful! Love it. |
| Apolinar 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseI like the feelings you expressed in this poem. The most important part is that there seems to be a transformation and meaning when you reach the ending. That's the most important part by far in my opinion. I'm usually against feeling poems since the vast majority dont pour any meaning or dont have hidden meaning. This poem is a little bit open in meaning. But just the same it has a powerful effect with the ending. Thanks for sharing. |
| kelloggs256 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseSo sad. Even though this speaker has realized that they must move on it hasn't helped in the pain they experience. How true of life. Another fantastic job. Well done. |
| t-t-t-ouch. 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseSo stunning, and so tragic, and so painfullt beautiful. Definitely, a favorite. |
| Random-Idiocity 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseThe fourth stanza is brilliant. Keep it Up! |
| simpleplan13 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseI like this piece.. its very sad, but the ending is great because it balances the sadness with a kinda sense of hopefulness... I also really like the 3 lines about the stars.. awesome job |
| Amber Seguin 2007-10-09 ch 1, | abuseGah. Painfully perfect. You are an amazing writer. *adds to favorite authors* |
| rust phoenix 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseVery emotional poem. I really like how you ended it, the mixture of tiredness and hopefulness in the tone. |
| Jordan Storm 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abusewow, this is really pretty, i like it, i kind of reminds me of what a friend of mine said to me recently... |
| Oraman 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abuseLove the poem and your review of my one submition your the only one it got and the only person that understands angst is the one genre that gets now respect. |
| psychedelia.melancholy 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseWOOT! WE HAVE A RESIDENT POET! |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseI really like this - especially the third stanza. Nice write. Rowan. (And thanks for the reveiw!) |
| Charity F 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseI like this one better. It feels like you're actually communicating something to me, as opposed to... not communicating something. >> And yet you're words aren't powerful enough. You used to turn my head inside out, Anna, what's wrong? |
| Process-Of-Dying 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseWow I can seriously relate to this...lost the love of my life...was with her for 2 years and she left for another guy...but yeah i posted a lot of stuff similar to the subject if you want to check it out...well written by the way |