This is so wonderfully expressed...

The stars that you have/Betrayed appear tainted yet I have faith in their/ Natural beauty to help me seek redemption.

Gorgeous imagery, inspiring message.

No other poem has made me feel this hopeful.

Beautifully done, it must be said. Fantastic. )

Keep up the awesome work!

Wow, thats very powerful! Love it.

I like the feelings you expressed in this poem. The most important part is that there seems to be a transformation and meaning when you reach the ending. That's the most important part by far in my opinion. I'm usually against feeling poems since the vast majority dont pour any meaning or dont have hidden meaning. This poem is a little bit open in meaning. But just the same it has a powerful effect with the ending. Thanks for sharing.

So sad. Even though this speaker has realized that they must move on it hasn't helped in the pain they experience. How true of life. Another fantastic job. Well done.

So stunning, and so tragic,

and so painfullt beautiful.

Definitely, a favorite.

The fourth stanza is brilliant. Keep it Up!

I like this piece.. its very sad, but the ending is great because it balances the sadness with a kinda sense of hopefulness... I also really like the 3 lines about the stars.. awesome job

Gah. Painfully perfect.

You are an amazing writer. *adds to favorite authors*

Very emotional poem. I really like how you ended it, the mixture of tiredness and hopefulness in the tone.

wow, this is really pretty, i like it, i kind of reminds me of what a friend of mine said to me recently...

Love the poem and your review of my one submition your the only one it got and the only person that understands angst is the one genre that gets now respect.

WOOT! WE HAVE A RESIDENT POET!

I really like this - especially the third stanza. Nice write.

Rowan.

(And thanks for the reveiw!)

I like this one better.

It feels like you're actually communicating something to me, as opposed to... not communicating something.

And yet you're words aren't powerful enough. You used to turn my head inside out, Anna, what's wrong?