 no.peace.los.angeles 2007-09-09 . chapter 1I can't say I fully understand this, but it's fascinating and beautiful all the same. Really some wonderful imagery in this, and yes, it's just wonderful. Keep writing! :) |
 kaylajac 2007-09-04 . chapter 1the last two lines, especially, have this galloping rhythm with that perfectly unforced rhyme, and god. this is amazing. tantalizing images, precise diction. i love it. :] |
 the naked civil servant 2007-09-04 . chapter 1oh, kahlo-esque...
your poetry is gallivanting along at an incredible pace... this is very... hm, how to describe? ... researched, structured. this frightens me :P. no, but it's gorgeous, really. i shall return when i am not reading the French Revolution into everything i see :P
love you muchly
xx |
 Summerdazed 2007-09-04 . chapter 1this is definitely creative, and a joy to read though i might not really understand it. ^_^
=summerdazed= |
 the blood society. 2007-09-04 . chapter 1this is absolutely /amazing/. i love the powerful imagery and the way you toss names and identities about. i particularly like the last two lines. lovely. |
 TrunkZy 2007-09-04 . chapter 1Oh beautiful!
The way it revolved around the months and "
I am left with December
till the year ends, abrupt." is fucking lovely.
And the title! ♥ |