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Bandits Sonado
2007-09-05
ch 1,
abuseHey, I like it so far! It sounds familiar. Lol.. It's good so far, can you update it please? .. Pretty please?

~Ray
Kanehila
2007-09-04
ch 1,
abuseit is very interesting, but i'd like to make a little spiel here for a second: you don't write for reviews, you write because you want to do it for yourself. just wanted to say that somewhere cause so many people talk about 'i'll write if you comment' but it just gets messy if you write while trying to please other people. in my experience it never comes out as good as if you're writing for yourself and just have the pleasure of other people enjoying your stuff. but to get to the point...
your story does seem very interesting! and you should definately keep writing it! i only made my little spiel on you because someone like you who has such a nice story shouldn't have to depend on others comments, you should just write!
Waste of Space
2007-09-04
ch 1,
abuseI can't wait to see this guy knocked off his pedestal.
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