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The Angel in Black 2007-09-07 ch 1,	abuseAn interesting story indeed. While the way it was written is rather interesting, I think it takes a little more then it gives to the plot. This plot could be a good novel, in first person or third. And there's so little detail, but so much info on what's going on with the main character's mentality. A little confusing on whether or not he was a vampire before or after part 6. =/ It was good, but could be better. Much, much better.
KuteVampire 2007-09-07 ch 1,	abusethis is really good. Vampires used to be my thing. Still kind of is but before i didnt know how to separate dialouge so my stories were really confusing. but this is nice. kudos
HGiel 2007-09-05 ch 1,	abuseSince this is so short I expected it to be...well, bad. You did a wonderful job, I really enjoyed it. Very very good!
Jessica Wolfe 2007-09-04 ch 1,	abuseLovely imagery. I was thinking this might be better as a more fleshed out novel, but that would take away its purity. Very nice.
Hannah Rose Williams 2007-09-04 ch 1,	abuseWOW! What a unique way to tell a story! I'm sure someone in some era has done this before, but ignorant foob that I am, this is my first time encountering such a writing style. Excellent job. You're very creative!