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Oracle of Destiny 2007-10-12 . chapter 1
I was a bit confused at first cos I didn't know what this mysterious being was. I thought it could have been a supernatural person which lead me to think it might have been a ghost. At first I thought it was a sketelon as it says "Bone white fingers" lol Other than that it is quite a touching and haunting poem.
DeepBlueEcho 2007-09-27 . chapter 1
this is unique. i like it and even thought it's a little creepy it's peaceful at the same time.
i like the third stanza a lot.
and thanks for reviewing me too.
Kissing Concrete 2007-09-22 . chapter 1
interesting. i would have had no idea this was about death unless you told me so. i thought it was about getting raped (honestly), but now i sort of see where you are coming from with the death thing. is he supposed to be god? or some sort of messenger to take you to heaven or afterlife? i like the different levels of interpretation that come with this poem. nice job!
Kicking Poe 2007-09-22 . chapter 1
nice transition from somewhat fearsome encounter with death to a feeling of great peacefulness. it is reassuring. cheers.
Kazuki Mishima 2007-09-22 . chapter 1
I really like this. I was caught off-guard by the line "bone-white wings." The ending is wonderfully triumphant despite the subject matter.
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