Great poem.

~Twilight Starr~

'Like Rainclouds' is a perfect title for this. It sounds like rain clouds and feels like right before it rains, when the humidity lifts and the clouds open.

Amazing opening line.

I'd like to have seen more of the beginning. The end sort of seemed to meander off in another direction and I liked where the first half was going...

Felicia.

Quite nice. Lovely imagery and word choice. It starts out seeming cliché, but the ending gives it originality. Good work.