Thanks again! I think I need to relisten to "King of Pain." And I know there isn't anything left for you to review on my account so don't feel obligated :P
So I was getting a little worried that this was somehow going to turn into an Exorcist type thing (I can't stand horror movies - so sad) but I'm so glad I kept reading. I really like how her thoughts, quirky and jumpy (naturally of course), are narrated. And I'm going to go listen to this song too, but I'm gonna have to agree with another of your reviewers who said it might be better without the lyrics. I really do like what's written (the hesitation, the hysteria, the commentary (Hallmark moments rock!), the brief but just enough of an explanation/background, and the acceptance). The song just distracted me a bit from your words and really the moment is a mundane one (pregant woman reflecting) and well, the nature of the song doesn't seem to mesh. But whatever, didn't mean to offend- just tried saying something other than amazing!

P.S. Not that I'm against Seether, I have several songs, so don't think that!
P.P.S. My two (ha!) pieces seemed well written enough at the time but upon rereading, too many run-on sentences, too many big descriptions/words crammed together, etc... so thank you anyway for taking the time to read it.
P.P.P.S. < is there even such a thing? By the way, I actually got a review alert this time so that tells me which email the account still uses (I think) so now I need to try every password combination ever. Thanks for that!

I like this a lot. The tone is very good, and the sentiment is honest. I want you to proofread it. And, frankly, I think it would be better without the song lyrics in it. Have faith in your words! Well done, keep writing.

I like this a lot. Really clever. I like how you completely got into her mind, and showed a different side to a pregnant woman. Well done you.