That is bad! Oh and I totally know plums past now! yay!

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His mother seems... overbearing...

Young love! I am stoked for Plum. I want to know more about her past! It is killing me!

Short and sweet. A mini-climax is building. I hope the next chapter is going to be full of action! Good job!

I like James. He is very down to earth for a Noble. I want to know more on Plum though... I think I'll keep reading.

Good for a beginning. My attention hasn't fully gotten caught yet but this was good enough for me to read another Chapter.

Sweet story, I liked the ending swell though you said it was lame. I was a little surprised that the Hurstons weren't more in awe of her gift, for a while I wonder if they even knew..

i remember the last time i read this story... i really like it. i felt bad for not leaving much if any reviews, so here i am! :)

Great story! I really enjoyed it, Plum and James are hilarious when they start arguing. Just one point, though - you might benefit from a proof-reader. There were quite a few easily correctible mistakes in there. But otherwise, very good, and I look forward to reading some of your other stories.

This was very well written. I enjoyed very much. I am a picky reader so when I take the time to read something that means something.

I really liked this story and I thought that the ending was good so you shouldn't change it and the title's good too, it's much better than mine anyway

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Tottaly cool story! it was so good i was hooked and couldnt stop reading until i finishe.

I love it! This story brought the tears in my eyes! I hope you'll check out my stories too! Especially Angel wings!

Grtz Silencia

Uh...I think I missed something. PLUM HAD A SON? WITH WHO? How old is she, anyway? This is an amazing chapter, but now I have to go back and re-read. I must have skipped over a chapter or something. Toodles.