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| Gabbylynn 2008-06-25 ch 22,  | abuseThis was very well written. I enjoyed very much. I am a picky reader so when I take the time to read something that means something. |
| MyFriendIsADork 2008-05-31 ch 22, | abuseI really liked this story and I thought that the ending was good so you shouldn't change it and the title's good too, it's much better than mine anyway :) |
| sugarchic33 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseTottaly cool story! it was so good i was hooked and couldnt stop reading until i finishe. |
| Silencia 2008-04-25 ch 22, | abuseI love it! This story brought the tears in my eyes! I hope you'll check out my stories too! Especially Angel wings! Grtz Silencia |
| DisturbedKittenWriter 2008-04-22 ch 16, | abuseUh...I think I missed something. PLUM HAD A SON? WITH WHO? How old is she, anyway? This is an amazing chapter, but now I have to go back and re-read. I must have skipped over a chapter or something. Toodles. |
| DisturbedKittenWriter 2008-04-21 ch 15, | abuseIt's me. The lazy bum. I finally got this far (yay me!). I will finish this...eventually. It might take me awhile because I can't seem to remember what is going on. I do love this story, though. I can't wait to read more (well, obviously I CAN because it has taken me this long to get this far...but it's not the story. It's my fault). Oh well. I gotta take off. Bye. |
| Chuck 2008-04-18 ch 22, anon. | abuseI have just finished reading this story, and while it could use some editing (you did say so yourself) it is well written. You never said what happened to Chlorisa though. Perhaps a sequel is needed? Just a thought... Or you could add a chapter... Or maybe add that part in one of the current chapters... Just a thought. |
| Estelin 2008-04-17 ch 22, | abusethis story is excellent and well done. i can not belive that its done. i will now be wondering if Plum and James have kids. |
| WhenItRains 2008-04-17 ch 22, | abuseThat was a cute story! I'm surprised you only have 4 reviews-well 5 if you include this one. Good work, I love it! |
| Estelin 2008-04-17 ch 19, | abusethese past few installments where excellent. keep up the good wrok and writing. i can not wait to read more. |
| HappinessGal 2007-10-31 ch 14, | abuseWhoa, gotta say I think fanfiction's more popular than fictionpress. By the time my main pokemon story was on chapter 14, I had about 80 reviews, or more. Anyway, GREAT story, update soon! |
| HappinessGal 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseWow! This is really good! Sorry, I'm new to fictionpress. I usually go on fanfiction, and write stories for pokemon. But I hope to be a writer someday, and you are really good! I would post up a story, but I only just registered and I have to wait three days. I think this is really incredible, though! Can't wait to read the rest! HG |
| Hikari Emi 2007-09-09 ch 11, | abuseHm...how interesting...this Clarissa person seems like a itchba (pig latin)^_^ or so it would seem. Hm...gardening...ha! Plum be noble! or so i predict ^.^ yays! Wells, this is a very good story and tis well written. I look forward to reading more ^.^ a helpful hint (please take it as such, and not as me being mean or anything): your foreshadowing is a bit obvious. to make it more suspenseful and exciting and harder to guess, try to hide it more. Make people actually strive to search for it. I find that that makes most excellent reading. Besides, isn't it fun to keep the readers on their toes? To always keep them guessing? ^_^ Keep up the good work! ~Hikari Emi |