Reviews for Keep Away From Children

Oracle of Destiny 2007-11-07 ch 1,	abuseAw, I feel sorry for the young boy in the end. His brother is too drunk out of his mind to even care for his brother. I can't stand people like that xD
Twilight Starr 2007-11-04 ch 1,	abuseWell written story. It's so sad. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~
Sweet123 2007-10-29 ch 1,	abuseMy first fic on I like the way you convey emotions
Nanako Tsusokei Wolf Miko 2007-09-26 ch 1,	abuseI love this ^_^ it has a great meaning and it's understandable, is this an actual experience? If so you should write a book, raally, or continue. but it's great.
xtotallyatpeacex 2007-09-05 ch 1,	abuseWow, this was really good - loved the end paragraph, made dor a dramatic finale. The only thing I can remember was 'one thought-Cool' - it should have a '--' or a ' - ' to seperate them. But yeah, nice job. :D
Clandestiny 2007-09-04 ch 1,	abuseI liked the flow of this story. It's very, good.
Tranquil Thorns 2007-09-04 ch 1,	abuseVery interesting! I noticed one or two errors. o: The sentence 'Hear it comes' puzzled me for a moment. 'Here' instead of hear, right? Anywho. Aside from that, job well done! =D I think you've established the characters very well, and I really like how you let the situation grow and open up slowly and with suspense instead of just explaining things outright. That last paragraph was haunting.