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| George Harrison's Lover 2007-10-15 ch 1,  | abusein the words of yoda, a good poem yours is. |
| Sendo1920 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseI like it, don't listen to any flamers. It conveys your message so clearly! |
| ThETrutHAbouTCaseY 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseumm...you really need to try adding more detail to this. C`mon, I know you can. some rules to follow: 1. show, don't tell 2. pity parties only on special occations 3. vary stentence structure and word choice 4. always read your word out loud 5. details and images are very important (at least to me) 6. reading will improve your writing 7. editors are devine until #8 is completed 8. writers enjoy killing editors hope this made you smile, keep writing. |
| Princess-anna57 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseTrue indeed. Well written. Thank you for sharing and write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |