I like the format a lot and the seasons stanza is great.. I also like the last stanza... "forgive..not forget" was a great line

:) like I said earlier looks professional to me :D

I like the way you described the seasons 2

ether way, powerful poem :D I like it

Oh very nicely done. ::) Great! Write on.

Anna _

This poem has a most singular form but it's somewhat well-written especially "spring skies to

summer sorrow

autumn tears like rain,"

Quite a commendable job there.

spring skies to

summer sorrow

autumn tears like rain,

-the autumn doesnt cry here.

wow. really full of emotion. good stanza organization...but thats just the mechanics.

its really moving, this poem.

this is so sad, but beautifully written. at first it bothered me a little that there was no capitalization, but by the time i was finished, i thought it added to the whole theme of the poem. very well written. i like your use of the "forgive and forget" theme as well as using seasons. keep writing!

Simply gorgeous.

Minimal.

Beautiful. You really should publish these. Your writing is something special.

Astounding. Great job with the alliteration - it adds nicely without being too overbearing. Good writing usually is centered around a development, change, or growth of some kind and it's also nice how you use the seaons to incorporate and aid that a little bit. Also, nice job being sensitive to spacing (e.g. the hyphen in careless and spacing - or lack of - in forgive and forget). All of these techniques are little pointers that help the reader clarify your thoughts and ultimately his own. Keep writing, k.

I like how you used the seasons in it. :3

I could feel the sadness while reading this. It's so well written! Keep it up!

I love how you mix beautiful wording and personal and interpersonal content together. It creates a powerful and intriguing combination. Really great work.