good, but just so I can help you improve your writing, rather than just saying I like your poem...some advice:

1. show, don't tell
2. pity parties only on special occations
3. vary stentence structure and word choice
4. always read your word out loud
5. reading will improve your writing
6. editors are devine until #7 is completed
7. writers enjoy killing editors

hope this made you smile, keep writing.