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| Tess 2008-08-29 ch 8, anon. | abuseAw!! I could totally relate! that would be me, excited to get held up by highwaymer, not afraid just wandering who my savior and future husband was going to be, or if it was to be my captor himself... Great story! |
| ShonaiulaRose 2008-05-13 ch 8,  | abuseGretna is waiting ^^ LOL, that was really cute! Henrietta is really cute in the way she expects real life to be like novels... I really like your characters. They have nice individual personalities that are written out well. ^^ |
| J.E.Wyatt 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseInteresting first chapter. Girls like your heroine are always so intriguing -J.E.Wyatt |
| atollo 2008-01-25 ch 8, | abuseGreat job. Very romantic, which I loved by the way. I liked the writing style, it was clear and well worded. |
| Cinnamon-sg 2007-12-29 ch 8, anon. | abuseAW! Love it! next time... longer puhlease |
| IheartStewart20 2007-12-28 ch 8, | abuseThe ending was great! It completely fit in with her romantic ideals. Loved it! Great story! |
| Katsaya 2007-12-28 ch 8, | abuseThat's so sweet and I'm glad Eric's gone. PLEASE update soon. |
| IheartStewart20 2007-12-25 ch 7, | abuseHow can you leave it at such a cliffhanger?! This is so good! I really like it. More soon! |
| Jak Coffin 2007-12-19 ch 7, | abuseLove it! This story is amazing and full of great writing. Update A.S.A.P.! lol :) |
| Daisy Silk 2007-12-18 ch 7, | abusei really enjoy this story, please update soon:) |
| Prieda Solo 2007-12-13 ch 4, | abuseach, cliffhanger and i have to go out shopping :( I am thinking of creating a c2 for regency era fics. If so, would you mind if I included this as one of them? Prieda =D |
| Prieda Solo 2007-12-13 ch 3, | abusethis is getting better. They are both settling down into their characters nicely. I love the story about the scar, sets of both of their characters so well. And i lvoe that you've managed to get their descriptions in without setting aside an enormous block of text to do so, well done :) |
| Prieda Solo 2007-12-13 ch 2, | abuseInteresting... "We’re in England! The most vicious thing you’re likely to find in this forest is a fox" heh. true. Although some badgers can apparently be quite vicious :p James is very nice. I'd have got fed up with her by now, knocked her out and tied her onto the saddlebags. Still like Henrietta though, such a hopelessly romantic character :) |
| Prieda Solo 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseinteresting story. I do like Henrietta, especially at the beginning, she reminded me a bit of lydia in Sheridans 'the rivals' Some of the dialogue is a little anachronistic, but otherwise I like the style very much :) |
| Sara Frisch 2007-12-11 ch 7, | abuseNice job on your story! It's really enjoyable! Keep writing. |