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| ShonaiulaRose 2008-05-13 ch 8,  | abuseGretna is waiting ^^ LOL, that was really cute! Henrietta is really cute in the way she expects real life to be like novels... I really like your characters. They have nice individual personalities that are written out well. ^^ |
| J.E.Wyatt 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseInteresting first chapter. Girls like your heroine are always so intriguing -J.E.Wyatt |
| atollo 2008-01-25 ch 8, | abuseGreat job. Very romantic, which I loved by the way. I liked the writing style, it was clear and well worded. |
| Cinnamon-sg 2007-12-29 ch 8, anon. | abuseAW! Love it! next time... longer puhlease |
| IheartStewart20 2007-12-28 ch 8, | abuseThe ending was great! It completely fit in with her romantic ideals. Loved it! Great story! |
| Katsaya 2007-12-28 ch 8, | abuseThat's so sweet and I'm glad Eric's gone. PLEASE update soon. |
| IheartStewart20 2007-12-25 ch 7, | abuseHow can you leave it at such a cliffhanger?! This is so good! I really like it. More soon! |
| Jak Coffin 2007-12-19 ch 7, | abuseLove it! This story is amazing and full of great writing. Update A.S.A.P.! lol :) |
| Daisy Silk 2007-12-18 ch 7, | abusei really enjoy this story, please update soon:) |
| Prieda Solo 2007-12-13 ch 4, | abuseach, cliffhanger and i have to go out shopping :( I am thinking of creating a c2 for regency era fics. If so, would you mind if I included this as one of them? Prieda =D |
| Prieda Solo 2007-12-13 ch 3, | abusethis is getting better. They are both settling down into their characters nicely. I love the story about the scar, sets of both of their characters so well. And i lvoe that you've managed to get their descriptions in without setting aside an enormous block of text to do so, well done :) |
| Prieda Solo 2007-12-13 ch 2, | abuseInteresting... "We’re in England! The most vicious thing you’re likely to find in this forest is a fox" heh. true. Although some badgers can apparently be quite vicious :p James is very nice. I'd have got fed up with her by now, knocked her out and tied her onto the saddlebags. Still like Henrietta though, such a hopelessly romantic character :) |
| Prieda Solo 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseinteresting story. I do like Henrietta, especially at the beginning, she reminded me a bit of lydia in Sheridans 'the rivals' Some of the dialogue is a little anachronistic, but otherwise I like the style very much :) |
| Sara Frisch 2007-12-11 ch 7, | abuseNice job on your story! It's really enjoyable! Keep writing. |
| Katsaya 2007-10-29 ch 6, | abuseI love teh plot line. This is such a good story:) |