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| hime1221 2007-10-06 ch 1,  | abuseIt's so pretty! The rhyming is awesome! SO much better than mine! lol. It's really great; two thumbs up! And thnx 4 the review! |
| Just-A-Russian-Kat 2007-10-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI believe that this is one of your simplest poems. Now, please, take no offense to that comment as I do not mean it in a demeaning way. I simply stated such for the pure reason that it is so easy to tell your care for these two, that I believe your writing must have simply sprung form your mind, to the paper, in less than a minute. Well done on conveying your emotions; it was lovely. |
| DiaRose 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abuseThat's really cute! You have some really original lines, and a few really hackneyed ones, but sometimes it's hard to avoid that. Really cute. Love, ~Dia |